My beta also had no clue about SWTOR, so it *should* all be readable without the SWTOR background. (Some stuff that will be revealed later would be obvious to a SWTOR player, basically.)
I'm glad Anakin worked for you! He is a disaster and I'm surprisingly fond of him. The thing is, he has actually uttered quips witty and not so witty, but he spends so much time standing next to Obi-Wan that he just doesn't register himself as a quipper due to the contrast. But yes, any observations are 100% stealable for others' character notes!
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Date: 2021-07-06 11:02 am (UTC)I'm glad Anakin worked for you! He is a disaster and I'm surprisingly fond of him. The thing is, he has actually uttered quips witty and not so witty, but he spends so much time standing next to Obi-Wan that he just doesn't register himself as a quipper due to the contrast. But yes, any observations are 100% stealable for others' character notes!